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Submitted: January 6
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This is the drawing ~Dejiko12 commissioned as her price for making the 1st place in #Frontier-Twins new Years contest! ;D

She did a great job on her entry! You better check it out: [link]

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about the drawing: It's supposed to be a bit naughty~
And as all my latest drawing, some sparkling textures! I am currently in love with it~

Critique by =Decora-Chan Jan 23, 2013, 10:02:22 PM

Wonderful piece, and very nice pose. The pose isn't awkward looking at all, even though it's certainly one that's not commonly used. I love the sparkle textures that you have worked in there, it really gives it a mystical feel to it, and gives the picture more definition I love around the head and arms area with the ribbon wrapped around her arms and the detail in her hair. Definitely my favorite part of this piece.

The first thing that I would say in form of the critique though, would be the subtle lack of something. Being detail or color I'm not sure, but there defiantly is more potential for this piece. One of the first things i might say is to maybe bring a bit more detail into the wings, fan them out more or layer them onto each other to give it more of an organic feel. I find they look less like wings and more like something she is laying on? Even though Angelwomon is the main aspect of this picture, the wings are a big added piece that could add so much more to this piece. Giving them more fluid motion would defiantly bring this picture more to life.

Darkening the Digimon might bring it more into the background, as I find the background and the main aspect don't faze well together, but a quick edit could fix that. I know from the artist comment that you were going for a 'sexy' look, and I get that from the picture, but I would recommend a different mouth to bring that more into play. It's hard to play with Angelwomon's 'expression' as she wears that mask that covers most of her face, but maybe more of a lopsided smile would have brought it to that look.

I find that there is much detail in the head, chest and arms area, and the rest seems a bit quickly put together.

All and all, I think this is a wonderful piece, but a few extra changes would certainly bring it to another level.

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