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Heaven's Lust by GoldenEmotions Heaven's Lust by GoldenEmotions
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This is the drawing ~Dejiko12 commissioned as her price for making the 1st place in #Frontier-Twins new Years contest! ;D

She did a great job on her entry! You better check it out: [link]

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about the drawing: It's supposed to be a bit naughty~
And as all my latest drawing, some sparkling textures! I am currently in love with it~

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:icondecora-chan:
Wonderful piece, and very nice pose. The pose isn't awkward looking at all, even though it's certainly one that's not commonly used. I love the sparkle textures that you have worked in there, it really gives it a mystical feel to it, and gives the picture more definition I love around the head and arms area with the ribbon wrapped around her arms and the detail in her hair. Definitely my favorite part of this piece.

The first thing that I would say in form of the critique though, would be the subtle lack of something. Being detail or color I'm not sure, but there defiantly is more potential for this piece. One of the first things i might say is to maybe bring a bit more detail into the wings, fan them out more or layer them onto each other to give it more of an organic feel. I find they look less like wings and more like something she is laying on? Even though Angelwomon is the main aspect of this picture, the wings are a big added piece that could add so much more to this piece. Giving them more fluid motion would defiantly bring this picture more to life.

Darkening the Digimon might bring it more into the background, as I find the background and the main aspect don't faze well together, but a quick edit could fix that. I know from the artist comment that you were going for a 'sexy' look, and I get that from the picture, but I would recommend a different mouth to bring that more into play. It's hard to play with Angelwomon's 'expression' as she wears that mask that covers most of her face, but maybe more of a lopsided smile would have brought it to that look.

I find that there is much detail in the head, chest and arms area, and the rest seems a bit quickly put together.

All and all, I think this is a wonderful piece, but a few extra changes would certainly bring it to another level.
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VorpalBeast Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi,
I wanted to let you know I have featured your piece in the Featured folder of :icondigimon-united:
This is a lovely piece of work and i hope to see more of your work in our group.
Happy Holidays :hug::love::star:
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GoldenEmotions Dec 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Awww that's sweet, thanks for the feature~  I really hope I'll get some time again for Digimon artworks in the future.

Happy Holidays! :huggle:
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kymyit Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my... I love it, awesome **
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GoldenEmotions Feb 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! :3
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kymyit Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_-
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:iconobsessedwithshiny:
Wow, this is gorgeous! :heart:
Though, is something wrong with her left (gloved) hand? It looks like there's an extra finger x:
Awesome job! :heart:
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GoldenEmotions Jan 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks a lot! ^^
And uhm... I count 5 finger, are those too many? xD
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:iconobsessedwithshiny:
No problem, it's awesome :heart:

Well, that could be a really long thumb? I don't know, it just looks like there're too many fingers :XD:
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GoldenEmotions Jan 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks though! : ) ♥
Uhm yeah, I guess that's the problem. I simply fail at drawing finger xD
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:iconobsessedwithshiny:
:XD: I can relate, I'm really bad at drawing hands >.<
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